Final draft 2

For local revisions I need to work on sentence structure, ways to keep the paragraph moving fluently and how to continue the points I am trying to make without confusing the reader. When I proof read I usually read it once completely and try and mark the areas that don’t make any sense. I go back to edit those parts and then read another time. When I read I usually just look for areas in the paper that don’t make sense in structure wise. Things that are confusing to me and the readers.